Pitch feedback

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Pitch - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0_KfgdCQaNM

Feedback - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=flxm98MN_OA

Highlight Questions 

• How are you going to make it look professional?
• Will there be any performance? 
• How will we see the conflict?
• Is their anything you have seen that has influenced you in terms of conflict?
• How are you going to make it come across as professional and serious instead of comedic?
• What editing techniques will you be using?
• Have you thought about the camera shots you will be using?
• How are you going to show the social media aspect to the music video?
• Is your product going to have a message to it?

The feedback we gathered will allow us to improve our idea, here is what we are going to do to act upon the feedback we received from our class. Based on the feedback we gathered through audience testing we have made some changes to our idea and incorporated some ideas into our product. For example Micheal suggested that instead of displaying a computer screen to show the social media aspect of the music video we will overlay the actual footage itself and show an on screen text graphic of the messages. The initial fighting conflict idea we had based on audience feedback is going to be problematic if we don't adjust our idea for this scene, so because of this we are not actually going to see the full blown fight we will see fast paced POV shots to show the conflict to our audience. We have now also looked at a few camera shots we will be using which was asked at the time of feedback and have now decided what shots we want to use, for example a wide shot at the start will be used.